young people do not give enough time to helping their communities.do you agree or disagree?
"In all human societies around the world, people participate in different ways in improving the social conditions. Some of them have a more salient role and some of them just support the evolutions." " The role of the young generation in enhancing the social conditions has become a controversial issue nowadays." " Some people think that today, young people do not give enough time to helping their communities." " I strongly contend that its true due to three major reasons. I will vindicate my standpoint in the following article."
First, the young generation has been deceived by the digital communications. Thanks to the cutting-edge technology, today we witness young people mesmerized by this worldwide phenomenon. They use their smart phones in streets, clubs, classes, and even in their bedroom. Most of them can't be separated from these kinds of devices for more than one hour. Miss using such devices leaves them not much free time and also energy in order to participate in social activities.
Second, the high speed of modern life style leaves no time and energy for the young people to concentrate on helping their society. They are so overwhelmed by this kind of life style that most of them can only fulfill their personal and daily needs and they have no time left for social activities. Also they have to work hard in order to keep up with the ongoing issues happening around them and this leaves them no extra energy and consequently motivation to act as social enthusiasts. Imagine a person who is 25 years old and he has a full time job in a company. According to the principles he should work approximately 8 hours a day, 5 days a week. He has 16 hours a day for doing other personal activities including sleeping, eating etc. And also it leaves him two days off at the end of each week in which he should probably do household chores in order to keep up with his life. So he has no time and energy left for other extra activities.
Last but not least, we have a more self-reliant young generation today in comparison with the past. And this over self-reliance can affect the young people tendency to participate in social activities which makes their society a better place to live. A recent research conducted in Canada illustrates that eight out of ten people who has an age between 20 and 30 believe that they could have a successful life just by paying attention to their individual needs. This shows that the young generation is losing its' interest in having an effective role in the society gradually.
To make a long story short, if want to witness the upcoming generation having a role in their society, we should pay attention to their use of technology, modern life style conditions and also their sense of self-reliance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ave no time left for social activities. Also they have to work hard in order to keep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87866108787 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86367975743 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506276150628 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4952412231 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227189949037 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624534855014 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541275137326 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118437434278 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384140194742 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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