in today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes rather than work slowly and make sure that everything is correct
In the last three decades, the world has changed drastically. The job market has become more intricate and competitive. Smoe companies put their employees under stress to work fast and risk making mistakes, in order to achieve a financial success. From a personal perspective, working slowley and make sure that everything is correct is better than working quickly and under pressure given that slow working has a positive impact on safety, productivity and rational thinking. Below I will strive to explain my supporting points in more details.
The first and foremost point, when employees work slowly and relaxed, they could enhance safety. Furthermore, making mistakes in some occupations is very harmful and could not be fixed. For instance, physicians and pharmacists have to take their time to finish their work given that patients' safety is number one priority. Provided that they work in stress-free environment, they could provided a strong health care system. Consequently, slow working is significant for safety.
Next, coupled with safety, thinking rationally is another virtue of relax working. Employees who work slowly could focus on their work, so they make mistakes less often. A vivid example that could be given to shed light on what was elaborated above, two years ago, my brother started to work in a the management department of a prestigious company. Since he work in a stress-free atmosphere, he could analyze relevant information, such as data and judgments and make optimal decisions. To illustrate this point, working in a calm environment help him to gain a profound understand of many aspects, so they could improve his guidance that based on facts.
Ultimately, productivity in another subtle point that should be born in mind. Even though employees who work under pressure could finish their work faster, they are less effective. To be more elucidate, they usually fell tense and overwhelmed, thus they end up to hate their jobs. Nevertheless, employees who work slowly could be more productive. For example, the software and Hardware engineers in Silicon Valley work in a relax environment, they could come up with new design and projects, which play a vital role on companies economical success. As a result, working slowly is integral to promote productivity.
Taking everything into consideration, without a doubt, more relax approach at work could not only enhance employees' mental well-being, but also foster safety. It is suggested that companies design new programs that help their employees to do their roles without stress and improve their work-capacity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32524271845 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85230012208 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558252427184 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8911415261 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3913043478 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9130434783 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310853319912 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963132443656 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822558788453 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191445350492 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864035157073 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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