I am glad to hear that it was merely a wish of the company to build a large factory near my community. It would not be feasible to start this plan, as my community is dense with reridents where lots of olds ang youths who need to be taken care of. Compaerd with teh benefit it may birng to us, I believe more people in my community would agree with my stand that I do not support this factory. I will address my views thereinafter.
To begin with, the community I live in locates in the northern of the urban where major residents live, thus the road is crowded with people. There is no sufficient space to build a largr factory in my community. Also, a large community would bring more people here to work, which in my opinion it is not a politic idea to locates the new factory here, as it would not be convinient to transport products and there would be more conflicts between the residents and the factory, as most of the people in my community like my have been living in this place for decades without any facotory here and we like the environment around us.
Moreover, maybe it would bring an increase in employment in my comunity while the most adult in my community worked in other place of my city. and it would be a hard mission to employ workers here as most of the residents who at the suitable age for working have jobs already, ther others are old people and youths at schools. New workers would be recruited far away, the cost of commuting and renting houses would be their extra expense if the company build a large factory here.
Finally, there is a serious air pollution in my city, thus the Municipal government enacted a rule years ago that no factory would be built in the urban of the city due to the air pollution and traffic issues, the goverment had planned a specific region in the suburban of my city for new factories. Thus the plan of the company which wished to build a large factory would noe be taken into practice. Besides, once the government wanted to build a new library in my community, while this idea was strongly argued by the residents, as we are living near our province' library, there is no need and no space to build another one. Let alone the factory mentions in this essay.
In all, it is true that a new large factories means more jobs and oppurtunities for people, while in my community, it would be impossible to build a new facotry as there is no mature incidence to support this plan. What's more, as a resident in my community I share the same idea with majority neighbuors. We all do not want to live near a large factory where there would be more inconvinience to our daily life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...s without any facotory here and we like the environment around us. Moreover, maybe it would bring an i...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...unity worked in other place of my city. and it would be a hard mission to employ wo...
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Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'serious air pollution'.
Suggestion: serious air pollution
...arge factory here. Finally, there is a serious air pollution in my city, thus the Municipal governme...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... suburban of my city for new factories. Thus the plan of the company which wished to...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factories'' or 'factory's'?
Suggestion: factories'; factory's
... In all, it is true that a new large factories means more jobs and oppurtunities for p...
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Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... mature incidence to support this plan. Whats more, as a resident in my community I s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41104294479 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43231912568 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447852760736 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5048581909 48.9658058833 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.882352941 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7647058824 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16749509769 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840708356331 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794852315023 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120940044092 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484952220703 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.89 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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