Thinking about life in general brings us a very important question; should we always do the stuff that make us happy or should we sometimes do stuff that is not that enjoyable. I believe a person should always do what he find enjoyable. I have got some reasons for that which i will elaborate in the ensuing paragraphs.
To start with, doing what a person enjoys is really important for mental peace. What happens is if we do something that is not enjoyable, we might not be happy, and when we continue doing it eventually it starts frustrating us and later it becomes a torture. I have got a compelling example; My friend, who always wanted to become a pilot, was forced by her father to become an engineer. She got into the University, which was the best in the area, started studying, but was not happy with her life. Even after a semester, which she managed to clear, she was not contended. Frustration started building up and eventually she left after two years after being diagnosed with depression, wasting all these years. She is now in flying school, happy and contended.
Another reason to be mentioned here is that, if we are happy with what we do, there will be job satisfaction. To be more specific, when you love your work and find it enjoyable, you are more likely to give the best output, because there is this passion, love for the job and determination to be the best. These things help us excel in what we do! Eventually, we become the best of the best. I have my own compelling reason, when I was in high school, I used to work in a supermarket, I used to hate my job. I used to be so irritated and frustrated not to mention, my rating as a customer guide was really low. But, when i got into the university, I started doing a job in a small company related to my field, my rating went up, and I was the best employee.
Cutting short, I would rather do things that i find enjoyable. Sometimes we have to do stuff that is not really enjoyable, but if I get a chance, I will definitely do stuff that make me happy. i believe happiness is the key to success!
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, as for, in general, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37209302326 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59834507939 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462532299742 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3187630878 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0526315789 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243650185869 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878270383125 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090930107879 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189909081302 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655635146986 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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