We have a lot to do in this life as if we want to accomplish everything. Actually, there are a lot of activities for each aspect of our life, what give it different flavors. University, for example, has different subjects and activities to enhance and improve students' skills. In addition, each subject completes the other so sport is one of these subjects, and I support the idea that it should be supported financially.
First, sport is very crucial to human beings' fitness and mental health. Therefore, when students practice sports, no doubt that they will get more creative. In addition, many studies states that sport one of human priorities because it considered as a defensive method from illnesses. Actually, with sport people will be away from too many illnesses, what creates a great a healthy generation.
Second, students suffer from university burdens, what makes it tedious and exhausting to deal with these issues. I think sport is the best way to survive from this situation, for example when students have examinations or tasks that need big efforts, they need something to flourish their minds. Moreover, imagine the university situation when students are all energetic, it would be a big investment to support sports more financially.
Finally, we know that there are a lot of different sports so this verity needs a lot of money. On the other hand, students have different desires, and universities should respond to their requires.
In conclusion, people should not devote their life in specific activities otherwise it would be incomplete. Sport is one of these elements so in order not to lack any important part of life, we should adhere sports and support it more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05357142857 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76768663069 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1042503705 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138185498216 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497899750983 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317125696577 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834543543207 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340592581043 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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