TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Always telling truth is the main construction of relationship between people. Therefore, in my opinion, it is really the most significant consideration in any relationship between people. I feel this way for several reasons.
One reason is that it is a main criteria to gain trust of a person. To be more specific, it not only strengths the relationship between people, but also preclude the discontinuation of relationship, as well. For example, if somebody tells lies even for once, then it will be really hard to believe that person at the next time. Perhaps, due to dishonesty, relationship will be over. For this reason, telling truth is really important consideration for construction and continuation of relationship between people.

Secondly, it is good to tell truths to solve problems that people confront during their relationships. In other word, a manner or a character of a person might irritate his partner. As partner does not tell what irritates her, then the relationships cannot retain its strong connection in the case of repetition of this behavior. For instance, as your partner does not like your how you treat to her friend, she ought to say she does not like it. Otherwise, you will be keeping doing this. Therefore, that is one reason to show how significant telling the truth is in any relationship between people.

The most important reason is deriving us happy by making use of good impressions stemmed from always telling truth. Since having a good relationship motivates and encourages people to do good jobs, it provides a dignity and happiness. As life of successful people are investigated, it is pretty straightforward that they have a good relationship; thus, they are happy. These good relationships are based on trusting with each other and solving the problems immediately, which refer to having good impression. As a result, telling always truth is predominant factor for relationships between people.
In overall, it is good to tell truth to eliminate any possible problem for relationships and eventually good relationships make us so happy.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'criterion'?
Suggestion: criterion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18934911243 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16695213081 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520710059172 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0227194519 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29066128863 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104770661548 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884518549751 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183110811203 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408490726952 0.0645574589148 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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