Whether telling the truth or not, is a controversial debate these days. Some say honesty is the most essential part of a relationship among individuals, while others cast doubt on this claim. I suppose to discuss both sides in this writing.
On one hand, people who support the former idea assert that, although it may cause some problem to be always honest, you should tell the truth in every situation, because one lie pressurize you to tell lies more and more to cover the first one. Also if your lie become understood, apparently it will hurt the relationship, even your relation with that person is highly likely to be completely annihilated. For instance, one of my friends lied to her husband about her former relation before marriage. As her husband found out, the problems started in their life that would not have been occurred if she had told him before. Telling a lie caused her life to end up with divorce. Consequently, telling the truth is the main part in a relationship.
On the other hand, some people hold the view that there are many problems created by telling the truth. They assert that many affairs are not such important to be mentioned in a relationship and if you are asked about them, you can say a lie which they call a "white lie". Even many psychologists believe that so as not to annoy your partner and prevent discussion, you are sometimes allowed to tell white lies. As an example, my brother told a lie to my mother about his job that he was fired from. When I told him that the mother is bound to understand, he said he will have found another job by that time. And that was what exactly happened. Not only did not he make a new problem, a discussion between him and his mother was prevented.
All in All, nonetheless it is possible that I encounter with some difficulties, I suppose to support the first idea in my life and build my relationships on the base of truth and honesty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s more and more to cover the first one. Also if your lie become understood, apparent...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...them, you can say a lie which they call a 'white lie'. Even many psycho...
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Line 5, column 673, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...t exactly happened. Not only did not he make a new problem, a discussion between him...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, consequently, first, if, may, nonetheless, so, while, for instance, i suppose, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63148819088 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0063650941 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3529411765 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151140847558 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486372901164 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416073867448 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089023272157 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179573136407 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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