At first sight, trustful people appear to us as a pleasant speaker and we tend to rely on a person who won’t lie to us. However, further analysis may bring us to the understanding, that in some occasions it is important to say a small lie to save a friendship or relationship. In my opinion, It is better not to tell the truth sometimes. I feel vehemently this way for two reasons which I will endeavour to expound in the following essay.
The primary and foremost reason for saying a little lie is saving a person from pain and suffering. It is important to understand that sometimes the truth can hurts so much that can cause illness or even death. To detail this I would like to make an example, connected with my good friend. Once she was in the hospital. During her staying there she was always asking me questions about her appearance and her hairstyle. I was understanding that she would feel much better and leave hospital faster if I cheer her up by saying that she looks gorgeous and by keeping her in the wonderful mood. Even if she understands that it was a lie, she would feel herself more confident and her positive thoughts would help her to fight against sickness.
Another factor that should be taken into account is that many people are losing their friends because of that they are too straightforward with friends and doesn’t think about people’s feelings. A good example of bad consequences of pure truth is the movie “Liar, Liar, Liar” with Jimm Carry. As a punishment for his behaviour, he lost his possibility of saying lies and this made him a completely truthful person. This changes in his life became a big catastrophe that almost led to the argument with his son and colleges. I consider it is important to remember that we are surrounded by different people and how it is hard sometimes to communicate properly and make new friends. It is important to know that people won’t appreciate your truth if it hurts them, and, probably, they won’t be happy to talk to you again.
To sum up, I think that lie is an important part of our daily communication, and it is not always a bad thing to say a small lie. But we should always remember that sometimes a small lie can grow into a bigger one and like a snowball it could fall down on our head. Therefore we should distinguish which lie is for the best and which makes you a liar.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'hurt'
Suggestion: hurt
...understand that sometimes the truth can hurts so much that can cause illness or even ...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...example, connected with my good friend. Once she was in the hospital. During her sta...
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Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...out her appearance and her hairstyle. I was understanding that she would feel much better and lea...
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Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nowball it could fall down on our head. Therefore we should distinguish which lie is for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, i feel, i think, in my opinion, to sum up, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57808857809 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75811461375 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526806526807 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1475094993 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.45 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112723068509 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359099855462 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255486530736 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715401458621 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034595427311 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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