We are living in a complex society. There are many reasons for people to not always tell the truth. Therefore, the question that do we need to always tell the truth in our relationships is significant to consider. In my point of view, I totally support the idea that we should never lie other in our relationships. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, telling the truth will bring us peace. We all admit that we cannot hide people anything. The Vietnamese have a saying that says "liars always dream nightmares". That means if you deceive others, you hurt yourself first. You cannot have peaceful life. In fact telling lie brings you in trouble. My own experience is a compelling example of this case. When I was in high school, I loved to participate in a club to have fun with my friends. I asked my parents several times to go there, but they did not agree. One day, one of my friends told me that if I told my parents that I had to do homework with my friends in her home, my parents would let me go. I followed her suggestion to tell lie my parents. Since that moment I always worried and felt unhappy. I could not concentrate in my studies. I was afraid that if my parents knew the truth, they would be disappointed about me. However, eventually, I took my courage to tell my parents the truth. They forgave me and I understood that I hurt them a lot. Therefore, I never tell lie anymore.
Alongside the elaborated reason above, another idea that is noteworthy to consider is that our relationships are developed by the faithfulness. Obviously, if you are sensitive people, you can recognize when people are not faithful to you. Moreover, the more you believe and be faithful with others, the stronger your relationships will be. If you are honest, people will trust you and you will be happy.
In conclusion, people have different ideas about the issue whether you should always tell the truth in any relationship. For two reasons, which I have just mentioned above, I strongly agree with the statement that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ot hide people anything. The Vietnamese have a saying that says 'liars always d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66580310881 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78574034524 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497409326425 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3076529601 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3214285714 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269387971925 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708804524849 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756746922248 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191594128883 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926345390457 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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