There is a verse in the Bible saying :”there is a friend closer than a brother.” Friends have been always a very important aspect of life , friends can be supportive in tough situations as well as helpful in so many needs.
And I totally agree that, it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
First of all, no one will understand you like those who grew up with you,seeing you getting older , going through life situation and learning from them,to illustrate, I have this beautiful friend since we was in Kindergarten, she knows my family very well ,supported me when my father died when I was a teenager. She was there with me choosing college after finishing high school and during the years we were always together in our journey from childhood to maturity , based on what she lived with me, And how good she knows me , I always have this comfortable conversation with her when I need someone to calm me down during tough situations or when I need to talk to somebody.
Second of all, when someone gets older and busier, finding a new friend won’t be as easy as when we were younger with less responsibilities,
for example, when I was younger before marriage, I had so much free time allowing me to hung up with friends and go places and see new places, but now that I am a working mother I barely have free time to go anywhere other than my kids ‘s activity places ! So not enough time to know new people or having more friends and consequently establishing the relationship with my old friends whom I already knew was so important to give me a social life of my own .
Finally, keeping your good old friends is a very good way of maintaining healthy social life
With people who know you, care about you as well as always be there for you whenever you need them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, so, well, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53776435045 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63885490232 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.1344086022 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.570251154 48.9658058833 328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.333333333 100.406767564 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.1666666667 20.6045352989 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 5.45110844103 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211496181904 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157188916186 0.076458572812 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137421283504 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145393380756 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126555126555 0.0645574589148 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 11.7677419355 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 58.1214874552 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.1575268817 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.94 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.0537634409 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.