When it comes to the topic of cars in the future, people tend to develop various viewpoints. Some adopts the idea that it will be fewer car than nowaday because advanced technology will provide more modern vehicle in the future, whereas others are more inclined to the opposite idea because other transportation, include new inventors in the future, will not be as safe as car. Personally, I found myself at the same place with the former notion because of the following reasons.
First and foremost, public transportation allow people to travel easily like car, but people would prefer public transportation because having a car cost a impressive amount of money. Furthermore, with the development of technology, it will be safer and faster for people to move in a city in the future. Let take some example from the modern world. In japan, scientist are developing their subway system by using magnetic; this technology enable Japanese people to travel from Tokyo to Osaka within 50 minutes and it is totally safe. Interestingly, although this sounds like science fiction, this system is almost done and japan going to use it in 2020. What can clearly be seen is technology created a boost in Japan public transportation, and soon, it will make sure that people around the world can travel fast, safely, and cheaply.
Furthermore, people are also not really comfortable in transporting by car in a great distance. Car takes them too much time to run on the road for their holidays; there are others vehicle are moving faster. For example, a flying plane can safe the costumer a lot of time. To be more clearly, to travel from Boston to California, a car will take a person 2 or 3 days, while a plane just fly for 4 hours. Indeed, people would prefer to travel without not spending too much time.
Considering this, I believe that car will be replaced by more efficient vehicles for serving people demand.
In brief, it is undeniable that people will not using cars as often as nowaday. Although cars are very useful, but they will be replace by more modern transportation in the future. In fact, with the movement of technology, people will higheten the quality of their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ransportation because having a car cost a impressive amount of money. Furthermore...
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Line 8, column 49, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
..., it is undeniable that people will not using cars as often as nowaday. Although cars...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, whereas, while, for example, in brief, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85561497326 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67334755584 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526737967914 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2595447317 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148145336905 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530411257491 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367223759923 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995130295438 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355021570922 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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