We are living in a modern society with the assistance of technology, which provides people with many amazing things. It seems to me that car is the most important invention of people in this century. Car plays a tremendous role in our daily lives. In my view, I disagree with the statement that in twenty years there will be fewer cars than there are today instead I believe that people will have more cars than ever before. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, car companies always discover new things to bring excellent products to their customers. There are many kinds of cars with different types and structures that are appealing to people. Moreover, understanding the tendency of customers, car companies add many convenient features into a car. They make cars more and more suitable for people than ever before, such as the air condition, camera and video record, which enable people to enjoy their lives on each miles. Therefore, people will buy more cars than ever before.
Alongside the elaborated reason above, another idea is noteworthy to consider is that car is the best means to commute. In the U.S.A all people need cars to travel. Most people have their own private car. They need car to go to work, to go shopping and many things else. Imagine if you do not have a car how can you travel. You can travel by bus or train, but they are not convenient like car. Having a car, you can go wherever you want. You do not need to depend on other vehicles. You can schedule yourselves. Likewise, car is suitable vehicle than others. You can afford a car but you may never be able to buy an airplane. It is an affordable transportation.
In conclusion, people have different ideas about the question whether in twenty years people will use less cars than today. In my opinion, I totally predict that in the future people will use car more and more because car companies always produce new products and car is the best means to commute.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: MANY_KINDS_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cars', 'carses'?
Suggestion: cars; carses
...heir customers. There are many kinds of cars with different types and structures tha...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...s the best means to commute. In the U.S.A all people need cars to travel. Most pe...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...s the best means to commute. In the U.S.A all people need cars to travel. Most pe...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...sion, people have different ideas about the question whether in twenty years people will use less ca...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...whether in twenty years people will use less cars than today. In my opinion, I total...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63764044944 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44531627977 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505617977528 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3405186846 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7916666667 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251299541826 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804314231617 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674609893386 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169986620006 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523458843523 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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