We are living in a rapidly developing society. It seems to me that people are always in a hurry. They do their jobs quickly as though they run following the time. Therefore, people consider that whether or not in today's world, it is more significant to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work carefully. In my view, I totally agree that in every time people need to do their jobs meticulously. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, today the request of customers is greater level than ever before. It is no doubt that when people spend their money on buying things, they always consider the qualification of products. Moreover, we live in the world of technology, everything should be nicer about its appearance and better about its qualification. Likewise, the competition among others companies is greater than before, if our company do not provide qualified products, we will lose our customers. Therefore, workers should try their best to produce goods that can reach the standard of their customers. My own experience is a compelling example of this case. When I was in nursing college, I had a part-time job at a shoe company. My boss test my ability in making shoes carefully before let me began my job there. He also checked our products meticulously every week to make sure that our shoes could respond to the request of the customers.
Another reason is that work painstakingly and make sure that everything is correct will save more than working carelessly. We all acknowledge that when we do thing in a hurry, we can never make it perfect as we expected. Therefore, it is no doubt that we need to go back and correct our mistakes and it frequently take us longer time than when we make sure to be careful on the first try. To be more specific, when I type my essay, if I concentrate on my job, I will type more exactly. Last week, I had to finish a paper, I was short of time, and thus I tried to type as fast as possible. However, I made a number of errors and then I had to go back to correct and to check my grammar. It took me more than one hour to complete that essay, meanwhile, I usually do wrote an essay in thirty minutes.
In conclusion, for two reasons, which I have just mentioned above, I strongly believe that doing thing meticulously and make sure that everything is correct not only help us to save time, but we can make our produce better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...e time. Therefore, people consider that whether or not in todays world, it is more significant...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
... correct our mistakes and it frequently take us longer time than when we make sure t...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me, but we can make our produce better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52036199095 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64082880585 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495475113122 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.53792362 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8695652174 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2173913043 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17391304348 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24096120779 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678281611952 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944029399726 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163015298821 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572488296346 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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