TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The first car came into the market in 19th century and after 70-80 year later diesel and petrol cars came into the market. It was the era when people think that it is magic that people could use diesel and petrol as a fuel in the cars; that time, it seems that it is impossible and crazy people make it possible because of the hard and arduous effort. When the first car came into the market then everyone wants to see it and he/she started to see the dreams with car. Nowadays, we are living
in a era where car is the major medium of transportation and 8 out of 10 person have car on the earth. Despite of this, some people says that in next 20 years the number of cars will be decrease due to some reason. But, I strongly deny this proposal of some people because we are totally rely on the technology. So, as the technology increases in the market the number of cars will also be increase.

Indeed, as the technology increases; we human being will be rely on the technology. As a result, there will be a lot of variety of cars in the market. Nowadays, we use solar energy as the fuel of the cars. This technology came into the market in 20th centuries; after developing this technology the number of cars who runs with solar energy increases in the market now. we are not developed this technology much more despite of this,we have a lot of cars in the market. In next 10 or 20 years we may be develop much more in the solar energy and further can be use this energy as a fuel. So, whenever the technology increase in the market the number of cars will also be increases whether it may runs with the petrol, diesel or solar energy.

Furthermore, as we see in our society that people do not care about the petrol or diesel and these things have the limited resources in the earth. When earth will empty with these things then people will be totally rely on the technology; technology will ease the people problems. After that, solar energy car will take place instead of diesel or petrol cars.

Lastly, nowadays technology reaches its' pinnacle and we can build anything within hours that we developed in the past. In the past we have no technology so it takes time to build the things. In any car industry, we can build hundreds of cars within hours. So, all these fact shows that within next 20 years the number of cars will increase.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s with car. Nowadays, we are living in a era where car is the major medium of tr...
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Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...edium of transportation and 8 out of 10 person have car on the earth. Despite of this,...
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Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...l of some people because we are totally rely on the technology. So, as the technolog...
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Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... we are totally rely on the technology. So, as the technology increases in the market ...
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Line 4, column 371, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...lar energy increases in the market now. we are not developed this technology much ...
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...his technology much more despite of this,we have a lot of cars in the market. In ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, lastly, may, so, then, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3876146789 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25338521538 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.392201834862 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6171016006 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0952380952 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09523809524 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14611527583 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600651150618 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392891309472 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932663048701 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270747166674 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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