As time goes on, the number of population around the world is increasing although the reason of death also increases. With this increasing rate ,there is a question about the used cars in near future maybe twenty years later. Some people believe that fewer cars will be in use while others think that the number of cars will be higher than currnet time.I agree with the later one and I will talk about my reasons.
First, as time passes, the technology is advancing more and more. Higher technology makes people get used to comfortable and convenient way of life .Consequently, they will not use public transportations to reach the work place every day but they prefer driving their own cars although they come up with more traffic and they have to spend much more time travelling home.
Second, I believe that urban planning will go through an innovation in which many more bridges will be constructed with complex structures of perhaps two or three levels on top of each other which facilitate vehicle transportation. As a result of solving traffic problems, car manufacturers will feel safe to continue to produce cars and there is no concern about traffic in the cities. It will guarantee their sales.
Finally, in my opinion, the number of cars produced will exceed the number of obsolete cars that are no longer in use. In support of this idea I can say that if you consider cellphone production in the past decade and you look at the growth rate of smart phone consumption, this demonstrates that consumption of new technology is something unavoidable for the modern generation. In twenty years the situation for used cars will be the same. The newer models available for people the more they prefer having better and higher quality cars.
In conclusion, I agree that in twenty years there will be more cars in use than there are today
The greater the selection or range of cars available, the more likely it is that people will select better and high quality cars.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245901639344 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.142076502732 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103825136612 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382513661202 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0464480874317 0.0685040099705 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153005464481 0.118717715034 129% => OK
Participles: 0.0273224043716 0.0351676179071 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57076554616 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0136612021858 0.0309702414327 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00273224043716 0.00188951952338 145% => OK
Determiners: 0.0874316939891 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0355191256831 0.0209618222197 169% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00819672131148 0.0139019557991 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1986.0 2387.08602151 83% => OK
No of words: 341.0 408.028673835 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82404692082 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310850439883 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.196480938416 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.131964809384 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.099706744868 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57076554616 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539589442815 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 57.9947781764 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 26.2307692308 20.5533526081 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4445031945 48.84282405 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.769230769 120.699889404 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.5533526081 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 0.644075263715 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 45.8788630724 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.87951807229 1.45489161554 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348531978726 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124536589995 0.103427244359 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0805364810582 0.0752933317313 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.654407494761 0.497263757937 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201893983486 0.151897553556 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155375524126 0.114077575197 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101694607913 0.0781384742642 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.20030010498 0.336927656856 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0574140010028 0.067059652881 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236565619492 0.210909579961 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125316460622 0.0618886996521 202% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.