in the current emerging trend, the people are expecting the cheerful and more convenient life. Although it is not a unique idea for everyone, the pleasant life is possible with the facilities available surrounding. Some people believe that the life is easier than the older generations. and others are not. As per as my concern I believe as go on changing the time, the life is more smooth because of the advanced technology and the more convenient.
First, today's life is a piece of cack because of the technology. particularly, when we consider the communication, it is easier to connect because now we have mobile phones, computers. If I need to send to send a message, all I need to dial the ten digit number. Furthermore, now people are using video calls like Skype and other social media to convey face to face message. However, I don't believe all these effortlessness could be available in the past generations like grandfathers age. for an instant, recently when I was talking with my grandfather in face time, he saw my face and told me that all these facilities are not available when he was you. In addition to that, he mentioned it is very difficult to contact others even in the emergency situation. with this i can say today life is much easier than the past.
Second, since the things are more accessible, the life is relaxed. If we need to shop for the family, we can open the laptop and we can order all the required goods for the whole family. It saves time, energy and also money because if we do online shopping, most of the time we get discount coupons. What more, I can finish the shopping without the step out from home. besides that, now everyone where the fast food courts are available. it saves a lot of time and money because of no need to prepare food and also an affordable price. For example, recently I was ordered a pair of shirts through a famous online website and I paid very less amount and I also got a bonus point and I spend those points and I got my meal. moreover, I don't think so all these facilities are available in the past.
In conclusion, as the technology grows fast, the people are attracted towards the easy life and now the life is very convenient because of modren technology and easy accessibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57037037037 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64435107211 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498765432099 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4252191968 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1363636364 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121360589895 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388091974841 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442712928225 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772518255016 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413296641807 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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