Yes I think life today is more comfortable than when my grandparents were children. There are many reasons: one of them is how technology makes our lives much easier. Another reason is that my grandparents had a hard time communicating with friends unlike now that we have phones or computers to text with.
First, we have a lot of technology to help us with many things. One of them is cars. When my grandparents were children, they had few cars so they had to go around by feet. That was very hard and tiring. Another way technology makes our lives easier is that we can find out about something quickly by using google or any other website that gives information.On the other hand, our grandparents used encyclopedia and other books as their resources for researching which took them so long to find out.
Finally, we have much easier ways to communicate with friends or family. We have phones, or computers. We can easily text friends or family to contact them. My grandparents had nothing but regular mail. It took most of the time more than a few days to contact people who lived far away. If a family emergency occured, we could just call and the other person would be on their way quickly. But my grandparents had nothing so if an emergency occured, they would had had to run or had someone else run for them.
We have a life that is much easier than it was for my grandparents. We have things such as technology and texting or an easy way of contacting than my grandparents had. We are very privileged and we have to think about how our lives would be different without technology. Life was very hard for my grandparents and I understand how lucky we are for having a lot of great things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...ny other website that gives information.On the other hand, our grandparents used e...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
... so if an emergency occured, they would had had to run or had someone else run for them...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... so if an emergency occured, they would had had to run or had someone else run for ...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of contacting than my grandparents had. We are very privileged and we have to thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, as for, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55519480519 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67564578517 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480519480519 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.672011772 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8421052632 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13275384095 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554520625659 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694263914467 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10927182539 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659194578302 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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