Life always changes in many ways from generation to generation. Some people believe that when their grandparents were children they had a much comfortable and easier life than what we have today. However, few people may disagree to that claim. In my opinion life is much easier and comfortable for us today than what our grandparents faced during their childhood. I feel this way for several reasons which will be discussed further in this essay.
Firstly, due to the advancements and innovations in the technologies in the recent times our lives have been made comfortable and easier. For instance during grandfather’s childhood the communication systems were not developed they used to depend on telegraph for communicating with people in distance places. In contrast, today we can talk to across the world at the click of button on our phone.
Secondly, the comforts in our daily life have improved due to various new innovation of new service based on internet. For example we can easily buy whatever we want at a click of a button, there many online sellers. All the household items are connected, we have facility to operate all the home appliances virtually from anywhere. Furthermore, with the advances in artificial intelligence there is very minimal need for human interference in the way machines work. Where as in during the earlier generations most of the machines were manually operated and human effort was need everywhere.
Lastly, there has been a lot of improvements in the medicine and medical technologies. In recent times it is much easier to deal with health diseases than what is was in the olden days. The surgeries have become easier due to the robotic inventions and the success rates of these surgeries has also gone up. In the olden days when someone gets a disease he/she had to suffer a lot of hardship to recover from the disease. Even the surgeries were very complicated involving huge risks.
In conclusion, I believe that life in the present day is much easier and comfortable than what our grandparents had during their time because of the advancements in the technologies, medicine and invention of internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07282913165 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91329185245 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532212885154 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9804269373 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3157894737 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181199607005 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546863403334 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573192357278 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103704853578 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056555176207 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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