Now days, media overtake the television industry to the high levels and encounter all the screening relate device. Media has a powerful impact onto today generation, it may be positive as well but their negative effects seems like this is a serious problem regarding to screen industry and there is a lot of entertainment is being carry out including the advertisement. Thus, I think, it is totally conclude poor outcome on youngsters, specifically if take in to granted the children, who aged is between 2 to 5 years. I would give this suggestion for three reason: no need to show them any extra entertainment, they try to absorb all the visible scenario and furthermore, assume many of the things in reality.
First of all, entertainment is basically the time pass material, in which people just crossing their time in relation to some activity. Now-a-days, person involves in electronic media and they contain lots of advertisement which is many of the time is unethical and beyond the level of understanding. Baby children teach many stupid ideas, instead of observing about the sensible thing. So yes, it results come out extremely badly.
Next, my second reason is children have a very powerful memory to observe and remember each and every tiny things. Whatever is in front of their visuals, try to keep fix in their mind, whether, the stuff has a very negative meaning, obviously, babies understanding level are not much high. Hence, they get involve in visible television adds very easily.
In last, if the children have a super intelligence about what they seen, that affects their supposing world and they themselves create world of illusions by just focusing these kinds of advertisements. To illustrate, one of my little cousin brother always interested in cartoons, especially (name: Doremon) and what I conclude, he always talk like that cartoon character and even act as well into his routine.
To sum up, I think, it is better to keep away your child by these types of television commercials, because it teaches your child a different world, which is definitely a new creation, just for the sake of enhancing the electronic media.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, regarding, second, so, thus, well, i think, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02793296089 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86566041475 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625698324022 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0532136579 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.571428571 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0758799027999 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253957421261 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217413454419 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0395021235038 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206041570127 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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