As the technology develops, people have become more commercial and they are not even spending time with their families. most of the countries like India and other Asian countries, the joint family is their tradition. However, now the families in the many countries are not as long as they used to be and everyone choosing the small nuclear family instead of the large extended family. Some people believe it is not necessary to give importance to the large family and others are not. As per as my concern, since the world has been growing fast most of the educated people moving their families to the urban areas, as a result, shrink the family size because of the cost and limited size houses.
First, the people in the past decade, most of them are colonized in their communities as large families but when the people start shifting from the countryside to cities for employment they limited their family members. Because the cost of the living is more expensive such as paying rent for the house and other utilities including their daily requirements. For example, when I was studying high school, we used to live in the small village with a group of ten family members including my grandparents. Although we have a large family, my father never feel difficulty financially because we got everything from my own farmlands. On the top of that, we have an own house so no need to pay room rent.
Second, if the family is large it is difficult to stay in the cities because the houses accommodate only a limited number of the people. When we are searching for the house in the cities for living, most of them are either two are three bedrooms means it limiting the people to live. Although, the people like to stay with their whole family, because of the restrictions they are preferring small family. For instance, when I was studying for my master's degree, I moved to the city. Initially, my dad was planning to shift the whole family to the city, However, he didn't get the big house to accommodate the total family. What more, we left my relatives in my village and I and my parents are changed to the city even though we don't like to stay away from my relatives.
In conclusion, no one like to separate from their whole family, the unfortunate consequences like increased cost and other facilities make people compromise with small nuclear family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70217917676 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52095672574 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469733656174 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2086254927 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.235294118 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737513971663 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304996093887 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282175683894 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491107056296 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267254438635 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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