TPO 14: Do you Agree/Disagree.
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling is among the most enjoyable experiences of humans. Generally, traveling can be divided into two categories. There are some people who believe that exploring one's own country is the best sort of travel. There are some others, on the other hand, asserting that going to a foreign country is way too much interesting. In my perspective, the privileges of traveling abroad outweigh those of the alternative choice.
To begin with, traveling abroad will help to know about the history of a foreign country. People can see monuments and bridges which have existed since several hundred years ago. They can also gain information about the history of a country by visiting museums. For Example, Iran is a country with great and rich historical backgrounds. There are many monuments and bridges remained from the past which are magnificent to watch. The Pasargad in the city of Shiraz and the Khajoo bridge in the city of Esfahan are the most beautiful of them. Therefore, the historical advantages of traveling to a foreign country are undeniable.
In addition, people become familiar with different food habits developed in a foreign country. This is often a delicious experience. They can gain information about the materials and the process of cooking or making traditional foods. For example, in France, some people eat "fois de gras" with a particular kind of wine; As this is an extremely delicious food which is really easy to cook. People can also know about the ideas behind some specific foods in a foreign country. The people of Uganda, as another example, eat the meat of the tigers because they traditionally believe that, in this way, they can gain more power to fight with invading tribes.
Finally, understanding different cultural habits of foreign people can also be interesting. Obviously, there are some cultural beliefs which are unique to a particular country. People of the Netherlands, as an example, have a great interest in riding bicycles instead of cars. Even their Prime Minister does it every day. Besides, some countries develop attitudes related to religion. For example, in India, people worship cows as their religion demands them to do so.
To sum up, I found the above-mentioned grounds pretty convincing that traveling to a foreign country carries more weight compared to traveling in one's own country. I restate that there are historical and cultural benefits as well as food-related issues which make this alternative stand in a higher position. After all, there is a Persian proverb saying that: "A man who has seen the world is more intelligent that somebody who hasn't."
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'carry'?
Suggestion: carry
...ing that traveling to a foreign country carries more weight compared to traveling in on...
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Line 9, column 434, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...d is more intelligent that somebody who hasnt.'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, really, so, therefore, well, after all, for example, in addition, kind of, sort of, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2217.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16783216783 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80138576127 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4354030348 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1111111111 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18518518519 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234163934724 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063945907743 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571389870194 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13708691175 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487584627972 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.