In today's modern life, people acquire certain accounts for establishing ans managing their lives so efficiently, that they are already access to planning abruptly and and improving own's selves day by day. However, financially supportive measures are really critical and significant, it should arrange at a proper way, in a specific time, to ensure your capabilities. Yes! I immensely states that being a responsible person, childhood should be effort full. There are many reasons for holding this opinion, like: it increase a child to be more sensible about future, leads to a perfect model life, in addition, it creates punctuality in little's one life.
To begin up with my first reason, sensibility made the youngsters more advance in fields and by getting plan for your future is superbly recommendable. If parents are supporting the children by giving them money, then they must know how will be usage of this cash and how will it benefits to collect in a particular way.
Secondly, there are many ways develop, to begin this method in a child's mind, through the options like: banks. To illustrate this, my mom and dad recently, opened an account in the bank for my little brother, to influence him as a big boy, so that he would able to collect and add his pocket money with his full of interest.
Lastly, in life, the rule must follow to encounter own's abilities, like be punctual regarding your money, where are you investing, when you are going to use this cash, with whom or many of the questions arise, so, the kid has to manages this bravely. Nevertheless, in future, will have to face this sort of things.
To conclude this, it is important to know the value of a certain type types of habits, which in turn, will focus on your future life, by improving in at place, where a child is starts to learn. Hence, it is the opinion, I would advice to the children also.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...are already access to planning abruptly and and improving owns selves day by day. Howev...
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Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'state'
Suggestion: state
...ure your capabilities. Yes! I immensely states that being a responsible person, childh...
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Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...responsible person, childhood should be effort full. There are many reasons for holdin...
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Line 1, column 516, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...sons for holding this opinion, like: it increase a child to be more sensible about futur...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'manage'.
Suggestion: manage
...the questions arise, so, the kid has to manages this bravely. Nevertheless, in future, ...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... to manages this bravely. Nevertheless, in future, will have to face this sort of things....
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Line 6, column 228, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...earn. Hence, it is the opinion, I would advice to the children also.
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Line 6, column 251, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...opinion, I would advice to the children also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, as to, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73780487805 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60270874319 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606707317073 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.94265232975 324% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8996321437 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1702468416 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573953637206 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456367854415 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089475051052 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035731534934 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.