Many may say that traveling with a tour guide is uncomfortable and unnecessary ,however, in my opinion, traveling with a tour guide comes with many benefits and packages and is very appropriate especially in countries where they speak a foreign language.
Traveling with a tour guide is beneficial in the sense that the tour guide would show and take you to really interesting places and really important historical monuments and relics of the country you wish to travel in, particularly if the tour guide is an indigenous citizen of that country. For instance, if you were to travel to France, a native tour guide would efficiently show you the important, exciting and interesting places like the famous City of Love, Paris, etc but traveling alone would leave you stranded and confused with places to go. He/she may also show you fine restaurants and introduce you to diverse native dishes of the country ranging from the appetizers, desserts to the main dishes. Furthermore, most tour guides are usually under a tourist organization so they come with special packages that would help you financially by finding a good hotel, restaurant and events that fits with your travel budget whereas traveling alone would may make you spend than you could afford and this would affect the finances of the rest of your stay in the country.
Additionally, traveling to a country different from yours in culture, tradition, food, and language comes with many disadvantages especially when you don't speak the language of the people and don't know the ways of the people. Having a tour guide takes care of this issue by teaching you their language, chiefly ones you could use in emergency situations, their culture and the way they think, talk, greet and interact. He/she would also guide you about places not to go as they are dangerous and protect you from being nabbed or attacked. However, if you were to travel alone and find yourself in danger, you might not know what to do because you are in a foreign country and cannot speak their language or even know anyone there.
Therefore, with the explanation I have given, I feel it is better to travel with a tour guide to avoid being stranded or in dangerous situations and also because they make your tour fun and exciting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88860103627 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60189409507 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484455958549 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.054008083 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.7 100.406767564 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6 20.6045352989 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 5.45110844103 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208981107063 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102858486062 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310741603754 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142467758689 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194073333985 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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