As scientists claim, the name the this era is technology. Without a doubt, technology makes life easier. And, transportation technology makes travel easier. Nowadays people can travel easier than before. In today's hectic life it is an astonishing fact that people from all walks of life differ greatly in their attitudes towards this phenomenon. We find that some people hold the great idea that best way to travel is without a tour guide, on the other hand, others may oppose the idea. In my perspective it is better to choose former which is perfect way to travel is without any tour guide. So as Hollywood celebrities say: "Let's cut the chase".
Talking the proposed subject into account the reason which may shed some light on my point is people are more independent without tour guide. It goes without saying that if people have tour guide in their travel, people have to go the places which the place tour guide states. For instance, last year I went to Thailand with my family. And we rent a tour guide for traveling stunning islands of Thailand. However, we never went to the phi phi island. Because tour guide made agreement with some business in the some island in order to gain more money. That is why we only went to these business's island. On the other hand, certainly without a tour guide we can go any places which we want. All in all, people feel more independent without tour guide.
Another rationale of why I take positive idea about the first perspective in the introduction paragraph is people may feel uncomfortable while traveling with other people. This means that, traveling is only good with friends or family. However, while traveling with a group, we travel with the people which we never met before. For instance, last year my sister went to the Canada. My sister preferred to travel with a group. Nevertheless, she did not feel comfortable because some people distract my sister badly. As a result, people may be in to bad situation while traveling with a unfamiliar people.
Nevertheless, the two paragraphs of the body should not be overgeneralized. Just an old adage goes "a coin has two sides", those who take the other side partially responsible every once in a while. That is there might be situation in which traveling with a group is better idea. This significantly lies in the fact that, they may feel safer in a group.
To put in a nutshell, thorough some people may oppose the idea that traveling without a group led by a tour guide. Not only people feel more independent when they travel with their own but also people may feel unrelaxed while traveling with a other people. If I have chance to travel without any tour guide or group, I do not have bit of hesitation to get it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
As scientists claim, the name the this era is technology. Without a doubt, tec...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir travel, people have to go the places which the place tour guide states. For i...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: phi
...Thailand. However, we never went to the phi phi island. Because tour guide made agreeme...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r, we never went to the phi phi island. Because tour guide made agreement with some bus...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ade agreement with some business in the some island in order to gain more money. Tha...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in order to gain more money. That is why we only went to these businesss island. ...
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Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n to bad situation while traveling with a unfamiliar people. Nevertheless, the...
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Line 9, column 242, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...may feel unrelaxed while traveling with a other people. If I have chance to trave...
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Line 9, column 332, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
... any tour guide or group, I do not have bit of hesitation to get it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2274.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75732217573 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60091234281 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441422594142 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6428403857 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3548387097 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4193548387 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38709677419 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17675290502 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558759872468 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049997766793 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11471104952 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421067569682 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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