Reliability is significant feature for the person. People want their friends to be reliable. Some people state that people behavior which always telling the truth is most essential feature in any relationship between people; others disagree. In my view, one of the important point about relationship among people is telling the truth all the time. The reasons are as follows.
First, people want to trust their partners. In order to people trust to their partners such as friend, co-worker etc, people always tell the true opinion about any topic. For example, When I was in high school, I could not decide which are should I study in the University. After, I ask my best friend to George to what should I study in the university. George knows me better than anyone else. So I trusted the George because, George always tell the true about anything to me. Because of the that behavior of George, we are friends for ten years. All in all, telling the truth is essential in order to grow strong relationship between people.
Second, even though some small lie can broke the relationship permanently. So many thinks is fixable but trust is not. Trust is hard to gain however it is very easy to lose. That is why, people no matter what always tell true to anybody. For example, I have a friend from my university. After we went to Asia for school trip our relationship become more deep. While we are in Asia, we had hard time about anything because we have not been in Asia before and Asia was unique for almost anything. And all those hard times we trusted each other. When we come back, we took a lesson together which is digital systems. One of project in that class, he did not say the topic of the project in order to get higher grade than me. Clearly, I find out that he is lied to me. After this time, we will be not be same good friend again. That little lie crack our friendship. So, no matter what topic is people always tell the valid things to their partners because trust is easy to lose and one little lie can easily destroy relationship.
Finally, some people oppose the idea that always telling true is not most essential factor between people. Not only people want to trust their partners but also one lie can broke the good relationship forever. Even though sometimes is very hard, people should always tell the truth in any relationship.
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...than me. Clearly, I find out that he is lied to me. After this time, we will be not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62142857143 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34996381503 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454761904762 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9451792892 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03333333333 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133140286679 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398518933937 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584547920804 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119508937893 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591366014536 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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