As far as i am concerned, adevertisement exaggerate in their describtion of their product since not only for increasing their sells, but also for overcoming to their rivals.Furthermore, any producer in begining of its work do this to promote faster.
The first reason which should be stated hear is that increase the people demands for supply by exaggeration.To begin with, producers always know about people's needity and they offer some fake benefits besides real benefit that supplies does have.For example, they advertise a laundary machine and besides some usefullness of it like fast cleaning and perfect washing they say this machine can feresh the air too.
Another point which deserve some words is that every producers have rivals and for being in successful seller they most be better than them.In order to overcome, some producer make some advertisements to sell more and in these advertisements they use some important person's like famous movie characters and football players to say something more than that supply deserve it.
Besides, for begining growing fast is on of the most important point that need to be noticed because not only do they have many rivals that they are more famous than them, but also to interact people that used to buy their things from one producer they need to make some advertisement better than them and this advertisement should give people more profits that before.For example, if some factory buld some stuff for exercising another factory that egin to work should make advertise that we buld that stuff with better qualities and with more usefullness.
In conclusion they are several method that every producer do to sell more.this methods grow over time and dont be stoped because its one of the most important issue for producers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14383561644 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70212207149 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.1344086022 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.622794378 48.9658058833 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 300.4 100.406767564 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4 20.6045352989 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8 5.45110844103 327% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125017588722 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730871789436 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337175219528 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730871789436 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337175219528 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 11.7677419355 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 58.1214874552 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.1575268817 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.0537634409 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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