TPO-21Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Knowledge can provide great success for any person in the world and it will give an engaging job for their livelihood. Communication, however, plays a key role in the victory of an individual. It is the process of imparting or exchanging information or news to others. I believe the ability to relate with others is much more crucial than tenaciously dealing with academics in schools because of 3 rationales, which I can elaborate in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, speaking skills can achieve fame in our career through the mouths of various people, which can ameliorate our profession. Fame gives us happiness and motivation to do tasks plus an exorbitant income. My friend's life is a compelling example of this. During our dental school days, he barely cleared exams and my companion never had attendance as he had been interested in the out-reach programs held by our university. He always motivated us to interact with people in these programs in the local community, which he attained much of practical knowledge about the subjects. Most of his classmates including me discredits this behavior because we had tons of assignments and test papers to complete. On the other hand, my friend keeps on focussing on his public speaking skills and communication with his patients. Ultimately, right after his university life, he set up a dental office of himself which most of the fresh graduates were not confident of. Since he was known to the locality, this was a great success and his dealing with patients made him a famous dentist. Now he is a billionaire and a CEO of dental chains in different states of the USA. This clearly illustrates the direct relationship between fame and communication skills.
Next, communication is needed to relate well to others. If we deal with this properly, we can prevent most of our problems. I can precisely explain this through one of the worse experiences in my professional life. During my dentistry life, I had a patient who came for a routine dental checkup. He was the last patient in my chart for that day. Moreover, I was in a hurry to close the clinic and go back to my home. Therefore, I didn't talk much and never recorded his complete medical history. He had a communicable disease in which those who treat him and assisting him had a chance to get the disease. He hides that medical problem since we never asked him for it. However, in his next scheduled appointment, he revealed that and we are a great threat to that disease. I closed my dental clinic for 1 week to do checkups and followups. Furthermore, I was in the brim of debt, as I had to take care of my employees' medical bills. If I communicate with him properly, I can avoid all these circumstances. So I understood that talking with people is much important that doing excellent in school
Finally, schools should focus on student's speaking skills along with academics. Programs like elecusions and private talks in classrooms must be included to improve their skills. These can appropriately improve the skills of becoming an upright citizen.
In conclusion, the ability to relate with others is definitely needed for the success of future jobs. It can provide fame, exorbitant income, ability to solve problems. Teachers have a role in molding their student's communication skills in the school itself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ic and go back to my home. Therefore, I didnt talk much and never recorded his comple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2775.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 566.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90282685512 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88228831584 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508833922261 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 868.5 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6170520182 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6176470588 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123850176742 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325186287146 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493528713224 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912291056769 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544735881597 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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