TPO-22
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A school is a place where one receives basic knowledge about everything to make an upright citizen. However, the question remains, is it better to expose the professor's view to students in the classroom. Some people may feel if a teacher directly expresses their political or social views, it may distort the student's critical thinking skills. On the other hand, I believe teachers should make their views regarding these fields to their students because of three rationales, which I can explain in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, students may face a lot of real circumstances right after their schooling, since the real world is soo cunning. It is a well-endorsed fact that students are receiving their basic education from their teachers. Therefore, professor's view is critical in molding the minds of students about that perspective. Our Biology professor always emphasizes the effect of one of the well addressed political problem- Abortion in our classes. He was against abortion and he always insisted us raise voice against abortion in whatever means we can. He elaborated on the health effects and the social effects of abortion which helped us to make a campaign in our school against this social threat. Moreover, he was up to date in reporting the news regarding the Republicans and Democrat's varied way of abolishing this. Thus, it is sure that nobody in our classroom or in our school may support or encourage the practice of abortion in the long run. This example clearly illustrates the fact that teacher's views have an indelible effect on a student's life.
Next, if teachers share their views, students can ask and clarify the doubts which give an in-depth knowledge of the topic. In a class, students are freer to ask questions and it is the responsibility of an efficient teacher to answer them. On top of that, substantial education can make a compelling citizen. For instance, a warmer climate is a threat to the entire world. The surge in population leads to increased utilization of resources and it's scarcity. If a teacher suggests measures to prevent excess fuel utilization like use eco- friendly fuel like the Ethanol and practices to keep surroundings cleaner, students can do it. Teachers can guide and clear doubts and ameliorate their activities.
In sum, teachers revealing opinions about the changing world is always beneficial to students.
By insisting their views to students and by clarifying doubts of children, a teacher can effectively mold a better future generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13834951456 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8431966728 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519417475728 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1308441401 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2272727273 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237603001605 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671830694719 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469939539986 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127637280995 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593630844027 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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