Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life today is obviously in the advent path of consumerism. The world has changed in many since my grandparents were young. In my opinion, lifestyle today is much superior to one who enjoyed earlier. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, this generation enjoys high means of transportation facilities, which makes our life much easier and fulfilling and enables us to move faster. The airways, railways, roadways, and waterways are developed to its maximum nowadays. Whereas, during my grandparent's time, this means of transport was less developed and sophisticated. I can still recollect from the photographs that my grandparents used bullock-carts or walking miles to reach their destinations. He used to woke up early and started walking to go to school or to markets to sell the products they farmed in the fields. But now, children had school-buses, cars, or public transportation for the movement. Unlike earlier generations, we have been enjoying the means of transportation for its utmost. Recently, the advent of Tesla driver-free cars made this field to the unachievable heights that older generations cannot conquer.
Secondly, society provides many more opportunities for women and minorities these days. In the past, disadvantaged groups had a tough time achieving personal and professional success. While this is something of a concern, it is now much easier for members of such groups to pursue their dreams. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a young woman, I was encouraged to attend university and later entered to dentistry field. On the other hand, my grandmother was expected to raise children and be a homemaker. She dreamed of being a successful business executive and making a lot of money, but her parents and teachers discouraged her from doing that and she got married so early. Unlike me, she was pressured to give up all of her professional aspirations. Her example demonstrates why life is much comfortable and open-minded now than earlier narrow-minded society.
Finally, the superseded use of new households made our life very much easier and comfortable. For instance, the advent of the microwave made our life super easy. On the contrary, earlier people used gas stoves for making which is time-consuming and tiring. But in the microwave, we can set a timer and the food will be tasty and delicious in a few minutes. We don't want to give attention to it as we can use the time purposefully.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that life now is much easier and better in contrast to life a few decades ago. This is because of the advent of transportation facilities and because women today have many more opportunities and encouragement than they did in the past.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17322834646 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13826040411 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6894931621 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6956521739 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5652173913 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91304347826 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162078597587 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428935549832 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030016869011 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999097361716 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201419223842 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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