TPO-28
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Children's education plays a crucial role in maintaining the social development. Among various educational issues, the issue regarding the role of parents is a contentious topic. Although some people believe that parents are involving in their kid's education as they are the most responsible person to take care of them, Others think it is not possible to encroach more on their education. In my perspective, in this current situation parents are not able to concentrate more on a child's education because of three main rationales, which I will explain from hereunder.
To begin with, parents need to focus on their works rather than children's education. Especially, kids of young couples are suffering a lot as they need to target their dreams along with kids. Moreover, the heavy work-load from a company or an institution makes parents exhausted and they will not spare time with children for education. Hence, parents are appointing home tutors for kids to teach them and help them in accomplishing their homework. Sometimes, elder brothers or sisters can help their younger ones to help in school works. My own experience is a compelling example of this particular situation. I'm the eldest of my five younger brothers. My parents have to work hard to maintain our family. All the burden of school works were in my shoulders. But when I think about my hard-working parents, I endorsed my brothers in all their endeavors regarding their school education. This example precisely illustrates the involvement of siblings and home tutors in the upbringing of a child rather than parents.
Next, teachers are playing a pivotal role because children spend more time in school. In the current scenario of the global pandemic COVID -19, schools were closed. But the government is organizing online classes for the students that make the next level of learning experience for children. It is hard to manage children if they don't have schools. But the teachers are inevitably the best heroes even during the time of the pandemic. They provide online classes, homework, and even examinations to simulate like a classroom setting. This is a great relief to parents and in this condition also we can affirm that the role of parents is negligible in their kid's education.
Finally, our children are surfing on the Internet more than they talk with parents. This can also ameliorate the knowledge of a child. They will learn diverse vocabulary, rhymes, and even artworks through social media like Youtube and Facebook. Parents have little impact In this situation as well.
On the contrary, in the past one among the parent especially mothers are unemployed and they have enough time to watch their child's learning behavior. Due to the drastic economic change, living situations improved and women are self-sufficient.
All in all, by taking all the above-mentioned points into account, I vehemently assure that parents have less involvement in their kid's education as parents not only tired from their work but also teachers, other siblings, personalized tutors are substantial role makers in children's education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...though some people believe that parents are involving in their kids education as they are the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...g example of this particular situation. Im the eldest of my five younger brothers....
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...ts that make the next level of learning experience for children. It is hard to manage chil...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... It is hard to manage children if they dont have schools. But the teachers are inev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, i think, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2612.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19284294235 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79967068687 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504970178926 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 799.2 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7566824075 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0689655172 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3448275862 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48275862069 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238517614665 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064484231535 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052209536063 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131623983569 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423901279757 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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