TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an
There is no doubt that nowadays people are busier than the past, so they intend to perform jobs swiftly. This brings up a controversial question regarding to working quickly: Is it a good idea to work fast and making mistakes? In this case, some people are inclined toward the stance that it is not allowed to employees to execute their duties immediately, whereas others disagree. As far as I'm concerned, I believe that it is of paramount importance to perform slowly. The reasons behind this viewpoint are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, working slowly will lead on saving money. In fact, by working swiftly, it is likely that workers and employees make several mistakes in their jobs. However, if workers execute tasks at their work carefully and slowly enough, manufacturers will spend less money. This means that the companies do not need to pay additional money such as buying raw material or giving salary for workers and employees in order to produce the goods again. Moreover, the manufacturer will not spend extra money for bills such as energy expenses including electricity and fuels. Therefore, one of merit of working slowly is economizing money and lowering expenses.
The second and important reason why I believe that it is better to perform tasks slowly is that it saves time. Although it seems at first that companies benefit from working quickly, they rather dedicate much time for their products. As I mentioned above, working rapidly without any care will result in creating errors and if the workers had difficulty to find issues in the final products they should spend a lot of time in order to identify and solve the mistakes. However, by working slowly and correctly, the factories could spend that time for other areas such as improving their goods or even developing new products. Hence, this is a prime consequence of doing things precisely and slowly.
On the other hand, the working too fast provide some benefits to manufactures. One of them is that the firms reach to profits early. Indeed, when these firms terminate production phase earlier than their competitors, they could disperse their merchandise to the marketplace instantly. As a result of this, the company seize the market and sell all of its goods. Not only that, but also they will be able to concentrate on advertising and marketing in order to attract consumers to purchase their goods. This means that manufacturer extra time for broadcasting at magazines, television programs and other media.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned factors, I contend that companies should enforce their labor to work at reasonable speed while being sure they have done everything correctly because of saving time as well as money, although labor could supply to firms some merits by conducting tasks faster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2364.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09482758621 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67954762518 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540948275862 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1325059396 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.782608696 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1739130435 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86956521739 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172080467802 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538879082421 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512801319412 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099626845015 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385204757696 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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