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of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
Teenage children are innocent and it's their critical period of life to make the right choices. With perfect guidance, care, and encouragement they can make the right decision for their life. Although some people think it is not apt to send their children for part-time jobs due to security reasons, I personally believe in "No pain and no gain". In other words, doing a part-time job along with their studies has numerous benefits. If teenage kids adopt the habit of hard work, they will never give up in their life and this can help them to get what they want from life.
To begin with, as a preparatory step for adulthood, children will learn some specific skills through part-time jobs. For instance- Driving skills. As an 18-year-old, they can have their own licensed vehicle to drive. In a country like the USA, it's much harder to survive without a car especially those who are working. Hence, if they have a parttime job, they are compelled to learn this specific skill which is much valuable for their rest of life. I remember when I was 18, my father first told me to study for the learner's drive test and he booked a new car for me to go for work. I'm sure that this skill from my age of 18 will be there with me till my last breath.
Next, Part-time jobs may help the kids to find their future career. Many of us heard about what do people do in particular jobs, However, We may not understand the skills needed for that job. More importantly, the experience tells the truth. My sister's life journey as a doctor is a compelling example of this. She worked as a research assistant in a reputed medical school under prestigious faculty members. Furthermore, she was inspired by the doctors, in particular, their ability to interfere in their patient's life. This motivated her to choose a medical school and her perseverance and hard work mold her as a great doctor. This example clearly illustrates how critical a small part-time job has the ability to change the course of our life.
Finally, part-times for teenagers will give chances to improve communication and saving skills. Working as a waiter in a restaurant has many advantages. It can provide a modest income and chances for interaction are much higher which not only improves speaking skills but also eliminates shyness. Children can utilize the money for their personal means and also to their families.
In sum, for the preparation for adulthood, a parttime job in teenage children has innumerable benefits. Studying specific skills like savings, communication, and driving plus helping them to choose future jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
Teenage children are innocent and its their critical period of life to make t...
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Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...booked a new car for me to go for work. Im sure that this skill from my age of 18 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, in particular, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85426008969 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62738273171 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542600896861 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5273424827 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2692307692 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88461538462 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345875998317 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965681616958 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730230597443 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209724574457 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688540420949 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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