TPO 25
That helping different community play an important role in the development of society is an undeniable fact. Should we realize the advantages of helping communities by young people in a society, we will ponder over improvements of juveniles' attendance in such activities much more scrupulously. Differences between youths in helping communities nowadays and before have recently been the topic of debates among experts.I do believe that teenagers pay more attention being present in charities and helping associations than last generations, hence in my idea they give adequate time to these activities, these are my justifications.
To begin with, nowadays with the improvements in the knowledge of parents, their children can have plenty of information about different communities and helping them. Most parents teach their young children and teenagers to help and pay attention to different associations and organizations properly. The new generation parents are informed about these issues thus they can transform these things much better than last generations to their children. The second reason why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that among the increasing knowledge of parents, the technology also developed alot and it can simply give good and useful information to young people about different communities. With high quality technologies children have access to many communities via different devices. As an example my teenage brother has twitter and Facebook account and continuously he gets information about variety of communities, associations and charities. Even I can say he is more knowledgeable about them than me and my parents. He always keeps his eye on different news from them hence he is giving plenty of time for such things.
Finally, even though most young people are occupied in different tasks and they are more busier than before, the ways that they can be aware of communities also evolved and increased. They can have lots of choices with reduced amount of time to spend, to get informed about communities and most of the communities give options to them to help faster. As an instance there is a charity in my country for helping sick children this charity uses very recent methods to give opportunity to people to use variety of choices to help them. As teenagers are more informed about new technologies they tend to get these information much more rapidly than others. Even juveniles inform their parents or other people about them.
Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather to look at it from another perspective as well. I believe that because in the past everything was happening in reality, it seems that young people were more occupied in helping communities. But now because everything is virtually happening, attendance of teenagers and young people cannot be seen visibly but they do help communities.
By taking all above mentioned arguments into consideration the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. Underestimating high amount attendance of young people in helping different communities is not logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to understanding that adolescence give more time for helping associations and can help communities and can improve several aspects of wrong viewpoints about this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...been the topic of debates among experts.I do believe that teenagers pay more atte...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'twittered'.
Suggestion: twittered
...s. As an example my teenage brother has twitter and Facebook account and continuously h...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'busier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: busier
...ccupied in different tasks and they are more busier than before, the ways that they can be ...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to use variety of choices to help them. As teenagers are more informed about new t...
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Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...about new technologies they tend to get these information much more rapidly than others. Even juv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, look, second, so, thus, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2806.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34476190476 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96859694139 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 888.3 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9903745723 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8636363636 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.002688172 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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