Tpo 25
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Today with our developing modern society, having time to devoting for desirable activities is like a dream. In spite of some people waste their time with no goal, others have their own occupies and don not have even a moment to relax and feel refresh. As a results, they can not devote enough time to helping other relatives. In my view, it is true that youth do not spend time with other member of their families or friends. I feel this way for 3 main reasons, which I will explore them in the following essay.
First, studying for many years takes consideration time of an individual; furthermore, he or she does not have chance to enjoy from being with his or her family. For example, I have Ph. D in organic chemistry and have spent about 20 years of my life on it. So, it is clear that I can not be able to help my communities.
Not only should we study hard for long time of our life, but we also need work to earn appropriate financial position these days. To clarify, I have a true story of my experience in this field. My country is in a kind of economical sanction because of political problems, commodities' prices have raised until 3 time; then, I should work from 6 a.m. until 8 p.m. to prepare for my life enough money Without spending time for my second-order family. Had not I forced hardly work for long time a day, I would have either attend in my family meetings and helped them.
Last but not list, it is understandable that If young people have enough time and money for their own life, they will prefer to spend their time to discover new place or entertainment. Our developed world has brought various and interesting hobbies for humankind especially for younger ones, so, it is more fascinating matter to deal with them in stead of boring visit of their old grand parents or challenge with their usual problems.
In all, what drives some body do not devote time to assist his/her relatives, may fall into 3 main categories, including shortage of time because of education and job occupies, and modern society's entertainments. I hope young men and women review their life style for enjoying more from being together and helping each other!
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, then, for example, i feel, kind of, as a result, in my view, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58868894602 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55246751926 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573264781491 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9567226735 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5625 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3125 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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