Nowadays, selecting a decent job is set to play a pivotal role in everyone's life more than ever before. In the past decades, perhaps limited opportunities to being employed might cause people to continue their father's jobs while this trend has been undergone different changes due to technological and industrial revolution. To the best of my knowledge, other factors contribute ones to choose what they desire as their future job.
The first point to support this view is that the vast and ubiquity of technology has changed the previous employment. In fact, due to industrial and societal shifts, most careers have been known as obsolete jobs or might be done automatically. To illustrate this concept, in the past, there was a bureaucratic process to examine and collect income tax for each company. However, thanks to the sophisticated program it is done by tax payers via the internet and without any employers' intervention. In addition, novel and more convenient kind of employment have been introduced which is required, well-educated applicants. Therefore, is some cases it is impossible to pursue precedent jobs.
Moreover, the labor market has been sought to boost employees' job satisfaction. If youngster tends to follow their father's careers, some critical points will not be considered in this trend which can impair the productivity. First, the most contributing factor to boost satisfaction is applicant interest. Reluctant to work in a specific job not only might cause boredom or other psychological problems but also might bring failure for its workers. Additionally, any individuals have a different expectation from opting a career. Hence, it is over simplistic to say a decent job in parents' point of view, is as the same in their children's perspective. Not surprisingly, when a job cannot fulfill one's desires or mindset, the level of productivity will be declined.
On the other side, there has been argued that people with the same career have a close tie with each other and they mutually can exchange their experience for further achievements. It should be noted that parents can develop and strengthen their relationship with their young children through pursuing the same hobby or vocations. In fact, the job is the only one side of a personal characteristic. Besides, in order to be expert in the future job, an applicant can take up training course or work part time in his/her interesting area.
From what have been discussed, being employed in father's occupation might not benefit individual completely. As it was mentioned, there are some occasions that this trend is impossible or can have a negative influence on job satisfactory terms. In order to gain experience, people can develop their dexterity in various ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employers'' or 'employer's'?
Suggestion: employers'; employer's
...payers via the internet and without any employers intervention. In addition, novel and mo...
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Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...surprisingly, when a job cannot fulfill ones desires or mindset, the level of produc...
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Line 7, column 499, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ant can take up training course or work part time in his/her interesting area. From wh...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242424242424 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.173737373737 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107070707071 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0383838383838 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0343434343434 0.0685040099705 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0989898989899 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0585858585859 0.0351676179071 167% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99846023693 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0383838383838 0.0309702414327 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0020202020202 0.00188951952338 107% => OK
Determiners: 0.0868686868687 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030303030303 0.0209618222197 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010101010101 0.0139019557991 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2766.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 445.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21573033708 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357303370787 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292134831461 0.251872472559 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21797752809 0.174417080927 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159550561798 0.112833075102 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99846023693 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559550561798 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 67.0488816416 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.347826087 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2903699037 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.260869565 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.347826087 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.695652173913 0.644075263715 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 48.561309233 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.62295081967 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31257289817 0.300154397459 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0544524116577 0.103427244359 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0489626070109 0.0752933317313 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46928128443 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.103815139171 0.151897553556 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106002017054 0.114077575197 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517420407911 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.334150081773 0.336927656856 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0482328155385 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199376172225 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436141449119 0.0618886996521 70% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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