Without any shadow of doubt, choosing a career is the very crucial decision of one’s life which decide the future of the person. It is very controversial question whether youngsters should choose a job alike their parents or not. Not surprisingly, number of theories are overwhelming this topic. In my opinion, teenager should choose their career according to their passionate not like their parent jobs.
First and foremost, most of the kids starts making up their mind to choose particular field of their concern during school time, new topics are introduced to the children so that they can find them impassion in the specific subject. Educational subjects which children find more interesting, they show remarkable creativity in their projects. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I was very much passionate about medical science since my high school, even though my parents were from the agricultural background. In the university, I did my majors in science subjects and entered in the medical school, my mentors were always impressed with my master of concepts. I passed my graduation with distinction and immediately got job offers from the best hospitals of my city. In this way, my desire to become doctor, fulfilled all my dreams and stand out my position.
Secondly, with the advent of new technology, a lot of more innovated jobs are created in the market in different fields regarding science and technology. From last few decades, technology has entered in every sphere of our life, which has changed the world into the village. Therefore, many IT companies hires the employees from the different areas of the world, provide the chance to make their life style better and even stamp the family visa. However, our parents were not eligible to find such amazing jobs at that time, and their jobs are obsolete in this modern era. For instance, my few friends get high salary jobs in the United States which make them financially secure, and they are able to roam the whole world. While, their parents wage was so low, they could hardly manage their kids and family expenses. So, choosing your career of your choice broaden the pay scale at higher level.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that choosing career different from parents widen the horizon of knowledge and makes you notable in your job. Moreover, renders you more facilities and luxurious life style with high amount of pay-checks.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06218905473 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60056394811 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564676616915 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6828363402 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314443670743 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951929259882 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824996444917 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213105547485 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632274960102 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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