The reading and the listening both are about silver coin which brought to northern America by the European explorer named, Norse. The author believes that coin is not a authentic evidence related to history, it a fake coin. The speaker challenges the statement made by the lecturer. He is of the opinion that it a genuine evidence.
First and foremost, the article notes that Maine where the coin has discovered, is thousands of miles away from Northern America, so it is not real evidence. However, the lecturer refutes the statement by mentioning that other objects which are important historical proofs are also found at the same place. So, European used to travel a great distance. In this way, this point is not convincing.
Secondly, the writer claims that no other coin found inhabited by the Norse, so, the appearance of one silver coin cannot prove the worth evidence. The speaker, on the other hand, argues that most of the European had not visited northern America in order to be settled. After exploring the place, they were used to move back. Further, he elaborates on that they also packed all their valuable things to take back and coins are also valuable, so they had taken back. Therefore, we found only one coin rather many coins. In this way, the lecturer is not agreed with the idea.
In the last, it is stated that coins were used widely in Europe, not in America, and Americans did not appreciate it as money. In this way, explorer did not bring coins with them. The speech, on the flip side, establishes that even though Americans did not view the coins as money, but they like appealing and attractive objects. Additionally, silver coins are impressive and unique which could be attracted Americans and they might be used it as jewelry piece as such necklace. As a result, this statement is also not fitted in the frame.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e. The author believes that coin is not a authentic evidence related to history, ...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nce related to history, it a fake coin. The speaker challenges the statement made b...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to moving'.
Suggestion: used to moving
...d. After exploring the place, they were used to move back. Further, he elaborates on that th...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ericans did not appreciate it as money. In this way, explorer did not bring coins ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 320.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79375 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43604924776 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521875 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0627228585 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7368421053 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381806714638 0.272083759551 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11209666693 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818946273348 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237423069426 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035827243565 0.0443174109184 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.3589403974 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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