With dawn to civilization, people giving more value to education and they provide the best school and the teachers to educate their children. It is a controversial question whether the teaching profession is respected these days or not. Not surprisingly, a number of controversies are overwhelmed this topic. In my opinion, teachers are the precious gift to our society and more valued in the modern world.
First and foremost, the significance of education has increased with the advent of modern technology. Its effects have been seen in every sphere of our life, most commonly it increases the standard of education as well as the importance of teachers. My own experience is a compelling example of this, my one of the favourite school teachers, who had taught me biology in the school, and I always respect him from the core of my heart. No wonder, in the modern world, there are a plethora of communication sources because of that I am still in the touch. I usually talk to him, not only on the academic subjects, but also, seek advice from him in the variety of societal issues. In this way, we have valued our teacher in a number of ways and even feel closer to them than school days.
Secondly, with the increase in population, jobs are decreased potentially. Even a well-educated person cannot get a job easily these days. So, people are more aware to provide the best education to their kids and make them efficient and independent. No wonder, without the help of educator, no one can get the degree or proficient knowledge in the particular subject. For instance, if parents feel that their kid is behind in some subject, immediately they arrange the tuition for him and try to approach one of the best teachers of the specific subject. No doubt, after getting classes from the experienced and intellectual person, kid’s grades are improved and parents not only pay the fees but also thanks and respect the teacher wholeheartedly. Moreover, when students apply for higher education, they need a letter of recommendation from their instructors, if youngster misbehaves with their mentor, could not get a good letter. So, the juveniles always keep in this mind, and always show good etiquettes and appreciate their professors.
In conclusion, I believe that the importance of teachers has increased because the importance of education has increased and to get admission in the prestigious university, you always need a back support from your instructors.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02184466019 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93081192584 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5068105463 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.894736842 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116938411636 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348143072677 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399358001526 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804922971936 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334146238546 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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