To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Education is one of the significant stages of students’ lives which plays a pivotal role shaping their future. In fact, the quality of education is an important issue which has been the matter of much thoughts and controversy among both policymakers and people. There are different viewpoint on the approaches to be put in practice to improve the quality of education.
The opponents of increasing professors’ salaries as a means to improve the quality of education subscribe to the view that this would encourage students to pursue their professors’ job, and thus fewer students tend to work outside the university, in industrial sector, which is highly dependent on scientific measures to sustain, especially in today’s economic recession.
On the other hand, the advocates of the idea that the professors’ salaries should be increased I order to increase the quality of education contend that increasing their wages gives the opportunity to work merely as a teacher in the universities. In this way, not only would the professors spend more times at universities, but they also can teach more effectively since they can better concentrate on their job. In other words, they do not need to select another job to be able to afford their lives. For example, consider a professor who has only a full-time job at the university. He can allocate more time to students to guide them to write their thesis, which improves the level of research at the university.
In addition, the advocates of the aforementioned idea assert that since the professor is less concerned with his personal life, he can better concentrate on his job, dedicate himself to research, increase his knowledge and make himself up to date. This would help students to access the newest information in their field of study. The more enthusiastic the professor is, the more motivated the students become.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the advocates of the idea that universities have to pay more salary to their professors to since it can benefit both the professor by increasing his focus and research activities, and the students by preparing them to achieve their goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'viewpoints'?
Suggestion: viewpoints
...ymakers and people. There are different viewpoint on the approaches to be put in practice...
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Message: Did you mean 'increasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: increasing
...s; salaries should be increased I order to increase the quality of education contend that i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26287262873 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08686243254 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49864498645 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7993511635 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.714285714 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126314026476 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596892757864 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106401515371 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112871391631 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142201248937 0.0645574589148 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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