Wiht the development of the society and people engaging in jobs that require intelligence and ideas instead of routely hard-wroking, people have more flexible working hours. And a prevalent statement we hear a lot is that having a job where you work only three days a week for long hours is more enjoyable than a having a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours, since we will have more successive free time to do whatever we want. A considerable number of opponents, however, argue that working for a extract long time will totally exhausts people. As far as I am concerned, the former view seems align more with my perspecitve. There are several reasons to support my point of view, however, the following two would suffice here.
To begin with, although continuely working for a long time is kind of exhausting, it is not to say that it is tormenting. As we all know, we do not perform equally efficient in every working hours. It is more easily for us to be distracted in the first and the last one or two hours in the whole working period. For this reason, the longer the whole working period is, the more efficient we would be in average. What's more, a lot of jobs need high concentraction for a long time, it we are always disrupted by the routely short work schedule, we could not concentrate on our jobs, thinking and working as in a deep level as we can. In addition, working for a long time every day also promises us a long time of relexation, which will also balance our attitude and give us motivation to move on.
For another, if we have a successive free tims by working for a long time every day, than we will able to do more things in this period. To be specifical, we could take a few days trip in this free time with our family, which it is not possible if we only have a two days off every week. What's more, a more successive free time allow us to relax more thoroughly. For example, I bet most of our students will stop their weekend enjoyment before Sunday night because they are worried that the lack of sleep on this night will have bad effect on their performance on Mondey, espeically when there is examination. For this reason, people can not totally relax on their free time. However, a more successive free time can give them a relief.
Admittedly, a minority of individuals tend to believe that the traditonal working schedule is better for the reason that people will experience a more significant up-and-down in their motion if their working hours and pleasure time become more polarized. However, I am confident that people will get used to it soon since the new schedule proposed in the stateement is more flexible, which means it can also be changed to the same as the traditonal one if someone wants.
For the reason above, I believe that it will be more enjoyable for people to work only three days a week for long hours than to work five days a week for short hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...onents, however, argue that working for a extract long time will totally exhausts...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'exhaust'
...ng for a extract long time will totally exhausts people. As far as I am concerned, the f...
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...m concerned, the former view seems align more with my perspecitve. There are seve...
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... more efficient we would be in average. Whats more, a lot of jobs need high concentra...
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...we only have a two days off every week. Whats more, a more successive free time allow...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, for example, in addition, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2399.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5009380863 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53633973077 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424015009381 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.877018273 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.95 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.65 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402597519044 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132525940822 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140482709397 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277933146179 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152403141578 0.0645574589148 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.