TPO 31- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without any shadow of doubts, modern technology advances have changed people's life and make it faster than ever before. In fact, our world is changing rapidly, and we have to adjust ourselves to the changes to live comfortably. Many people think that we are today less happy with our lives, while some others believe that these changes have brought many advantages to our lives. I am of the opinion that today we have a comfortable life due to the improvement of our world in comparison to the past. To support my stance, the following explanation will further elaborate on my perspective.
One of the significant merits of the ongoing topic is that our life has become fast and comfortable. As technology grows, people experience different improvements and advancements in several fields of engineering and science. As a matter of fact, we have several appliances that help us to live better. For instance, imagine you want to buy furniture. We used to drive around the city and compare different prices of the retailers and then bargain to get the best price which was time consuming and frustrating. Meanwhile, today, thanks to the invention of the internet, you just have to surf the net to find the lowest price. Although we are susceptible to be deceived by some fake advertisements on the net, the government has recently passed a law to control the criminal websites. Thus, people, today ought to be thankful for the technology advancement which has brought them a comfortable life.
Another reason which deserves to say some words here is that the health care today has improved significantly in comparison to the past. Nowadays, people have more knowledge about their health because they can detect their problems easier than before. Since technology expands in many fields, people have more access to the required information about their health and how to run a healthy lifestyle. Besides, the government has established several health care centers to heal people without getting any money. However, this was improbable in the past. Take my grandmother, for instance; she died just because of not reaching to the hospital immediately. Sadly, they were living in the suburbs, and they had to travel to the city center to be checked by doctors. Therefore, today people lead a healthy lifestyle, and they should be happy that there are many facilities for the sake of their health care.
On the other hand, today, the environment is much more polluted than the past. The technology development forced people to find the abundant amount of energy sources to run their machines and factories to create modem appliances. In this regard, we are making our atmosphere polluted by ourselves. It is vividly evident that after a while, our world will become inhabitable and we will get soon stuck in that rut.
In brief, by contemplating the reasons mentioned above, I am pretty convinced that there are several solid reasons to support the idea that people are more happy and satisfied. Not only do they run a comfortable life but also they have a healthier life than before. However, we have to consider the air pollution for the next generation carefully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
...Besides, the government has established several health care centers to heal people without get...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in brief, in fact, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2635.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 528.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99053030303 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73953930691 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505681818182 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 842.4 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7774460474 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1071428571 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19177404606 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480420640836 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038851516535 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105382017661 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466243033114 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.