Living situations in current world have been changed dramatically by the presence of rapid technology changes, new disruptive ideas, and complicated social community. The increasing speed of daily life with the new sophisticated living tools created the whole new world rather than a century ago. A question can be raised in this regard that is whether the satisfaction and happiness of people increases or gets worse over the time. I repudiate the statement idea and in the succeeding lines, I will delve into 2 reasons to substantiate that people are now happier compared to the past.
The first outstanding idea is that a human is a social creature by nature and it is important for them to have a social connection and be connected with each other. In this modern world with the plethora of social networks and communication applications such as Facebook, Skype, and WhatsApp, people can easily connect to each other, be aware of friends’ activity and even do things together around the world. Thus they can address their social needs better than past and be more satisfied. Suppose a family in which children live separately in a different country and it is difficult to commute to home to see their parents and siblings. In the past for staying connected to each other, they can just send letters having little emotions and grace. But now, not only can the whole family be with each other at the same time but also can speak and share emotions and experiences by conference feature of some applications like Skype.
The second reason coming to mind in this regard is that fast technology changes and science improvements let us overcome some challenges and difficulties that we never could handle them without these rapid developments. Safe and easy transportation, curing incurable diseases and building giant amenities which have a vital impact on our life satisfaction are now possible and every day our ability to cope with new crucial challenges improves due to these rapid changes. Take, for instance, the trip that takes two months in the past can be taken in a few hours by airplanes with more safety and comfortability. In addition, some small disabilities like poor eyesight and hearing impairment which are very important in daily life can be easily cured. Thus with these new facilities related directly to our happiness, living situations are improved.
In summary, all the aforementioned ideas bring us to the conclusion that current fast-changing world provides better conditions for people living and people are more satisfied rather than the past. This is owing to the fact that by new technology and improvements they can have more social relations as well as enhanced abilities to overcome crucial difficulties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10421286031 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85363010959 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534368070953 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.851307161 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.411764706 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5294117647 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170684183156 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058859242927 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044737631801 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116831107999 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372871896504 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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