Without a shadow of the doubt, life has been changed dramatically from last few decades which often arises a provoked question, whether people are living more happily in now a day or not. In my opinion, old people generation was more satisfied. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will discuss in the following ways.
First and foremost, with the advent of modern technology, every person wants all the luxurious things in his life, to fulfil the dreams, people are working day and night. There are number of issues has increased which directly or indirectly effect our mental health. My friend’s experience is a compelling example of this. After passing degree in computer science, he started working in a IT comany and in order to earn more money, he used to spend maximum hours in thje office. His work schedule was so tight that he was not able to enjoy small beautiful things in his life including spending time with family, playing with kids and any sport activity. With work burden, his health has become devasted slowly and slowly, and he got mental depression and now he is under the observation, and learning new ways to stay positive in his life. However, his parents were extremely contended in the past days even with the small house and with low income, hence it is proved that materialistic world can provide us facilities but not happiness.
Secondly, inflation has increased at rapid pace after globalization, every day new things are introduced in the market. It becomes very difficult to handle the expenses of daily life, so husband and wife, both works hard in these days. Gone are days, when only husband’s income was enough to raise the kids and feed the family. Situations are so hard for parents that they can not spend much time with their children. I remember when I was in the fifth grade, my mom used to help me in the home work and cooking food for me. On the other hand, I am so busy in my job, I could not get time to involve in small activities of my son. Most of the time he spends at day care and after wards we usually go to sleep. So, my friends were more prosperous and fortune than us, who had spent maximum time to raise their kids happily.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, past generation’s life was less burdensome as compared to us. Moreover, there was not race to get all the materialistic things, their simple lives kept them joyful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: a; IT
...computer science, he started working in a IT comany and in order to earn more money,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67136150235 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56271810395 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589201877934 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4353626119 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148033739214 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041804202702 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036215117586 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864307255545 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214083504854 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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