TPO-32
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons
Views may vary when it comes to the issue of whether youths are responsible for their communities nowadays or not. Although some people think that the younger generation is always diligent in their jobs, they are active in helping and caring for society and can influence major decisions determining the future. I feel this way for three rationales, which I can elaborate upon hereunder.
To begin with, a lot of youngsters are involved actively in organizing campaigns around certain social issues. The loud voice of these people can cause a drastic change in the world which is most probably beneficial to the entire population. For instance, most recently the murder of a black man in the hands of police is a nationwide rebuke with the participation of sen percent youngsters. George Floyd, who was arrested by the Minnesota police crew was pinned beneath a police official leads to his miserable death. Social issues like racism are not tolerated by people in the USA which causes campaigns and protests against the police department. Culminatevely, the government fired all four policemen who involved in the crime and charged first-grade murder. If the raised voice of the young people was not there, this case will also be considered as one among many deaths relating to racial discrimination. This example clearly illustrates the influence of youth in important decisions to determine the future of society.
Second, nowadays, youngsters serve as volunteers in social organizations like the Red Cross in spite of their employment. Moreover, these people are finding time to work as volunteers with no benefits in return. The youth thinks that activities like caring for homeless, sick, or elderly are considered as their duties. To prove this I have two examples in my personal life. First of all, my home town was hit by a cyclone in 2018, which causes devastating effects in my town. I still remember, a group of young volunteers endorsed us by helping in arranging homes and clean the surroundings. Our villagers wholeheartedly thank their valuable efforts to reform our town from the perilous cyclone. This inspired me to join the Red Cross to serve needy people. I got a chance to work as a volunteer in South Africa for treating sick and elders for 3 weeks. It was an unforgettable experience in my life as a youngster. These 2 instances precisely reveal how dedicated youngsters now to their communities and how influential they are for the concern of the future.
Finally, youngsters have a massive hold on social media to support and refute the ideas of government. For instance, the recent government policy of privatization of roads and bridges is rejected by young people through Facebook and Twitter which eventually opens up the eyes of government officials to drop the plan.
Some people believe that youth may involve unwantedly in some issues that may distort the original purpose of the problem.
All in all, by taking all the points into account, I vehemently assure that the involvement of youngsters in problems has far-reaching effects on the future of society. Not only they can aggregate others for social problems through campaigns but also they can respond through social organizations and social media to determine the drastic decisions concerning society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, for instance, i feel, first of all, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2768.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12592592593 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86024258662 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 861.3 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4107837596 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.518518519 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7037037037 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10882871259 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297629544738 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431681456025 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551879394134 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250666669783 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 86.8835125448 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, for instance, i feel, first of all, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2768.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12592592593 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86024258662 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 861.3 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4107837596 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.518518519 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7037037037 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10882871259 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297629544738 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431681456025 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551879394134 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250666669783 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 86.8835125448 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.