TPO 37
Perfection is the impression of pure efforts, when we talk about the efforts which will be dedicated to special task, it embraces the hard work. There are different kinds of people in the world. Some of them like comprehensively finished task while other just wants to passed by with taking care of many things at the same time. Obviously, perfection needs the considerable amount of time but when the time is in the centre of matter, perfection will be sets in side. When I think about this two kinds of people, in my prospective, latter view puts more weights. I will take position for the account with following reasons.
To began with, some people would really like to enjoy the time. Specially, they have left after finishing the work. If they have so many pending task, they are doing it not because they have taken responsibility, they are just wanted to finish soon. So, in hurry they may try to compromise with quality of work because they are able to finish the tasks as many as possible. For instance, when I was in college, I had quota of 20 patents in radiology which I have to finish it within one months. There was another consideration, as we could finish more than 20, we can get high internal marks for finals. So, everybody was trying to exceed the number in order to get more internals. When professor checked with x-rays which has been taken for all those patient, the quality of it was just ruined. This is how it reflects the message, while doing many things at the same time, only few things will turn out good.
Sometimes, individual have different priority, as like things are not needed to be done so perfect, only time is the matter where he can finish it. Let us have an example, my brother was getting paid for marking labels. He have to finish 100 labels within hour. If he will finish it in 45 minutes then he will get paid more. There was no one to check how the labels are marked. There was only priority, earn more money. In that case, it is good to finish it before time and not being worried about doing things well.
in the end, last but not least, people have to choose what they want because there will be many reasons to foster the ideas. it only matters when our prospective towards it changes and we consider which really matters to us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... efforts, when we talk about the efforts which will be dedicated to special task,...
^^
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n with, some people would really like to enjoy the time. Specially, they have le...
^^
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some people would really like to enjoy the time. Specially, they have left afte...
^^
Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one month', 'a month', or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: one month; a month; months
...iology which I have to finish it within one months. There was another consideration, as we...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...was getting paid for marking labels. He have to finish 100 labels within hour. If he...
^^^^
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... have to finish 100 labels within hour. If he will finish it in 45 minutes then he...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...being worried about doing things well. in the end, last but not least, people hav...
^^
Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ll be many reasons to foster the ideas. it only matters when our prospective towar...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, then, well, while, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50602409639 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31895131494 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510843373494 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6926985594 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2916666667 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.