TPO 38 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a shadow of the doubt, leaders play a vital role in social development and improvement. Leaders can provide us better community and they can increase our chance to have a convinient life. Some people contend that leadership comes naturally, while others assert people can learn it. Both of the opposing arguments appear to be somewhat convincing and stand to point. However, my personal experience and actual observation od life have led me to disagree taht leadership comes naturally. In the ensuing lines, I delve into my reasons to substantiate my point.
The first and possibly the paramount reason is that these days, people can learn everything through education. Entering universities is a so much promising step into a world of opportunities and one of these opportunities is learning about new concepts. So, if a person wants to be a leader, he or she can learn about through going university and taking related courses. Furthermore, we live in an information age. By having access to different online courses and different material we can learn what we want. As a result, I think people can be leaders just by learning leadership.
Another point springing to mind is that people can practis leadership. For example, when I was a child my mom and dad gave me different responsibilities such as buying vegatables, cleaning dishes and other tasks. Those tasks were practices to me. I managed my tasks in different situations that I had. For example, I remember that one day I had a really important test and also I had to clean my room. Eventually, I managed my time to do both of them. After that, my parents encouraged me and I clearly remeber taht they said to me " this is a leadership." So, I believe that through practice we can be leaders.
Admettedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that leadership comes naturally. Since we have some of them in our country that without having academic degrees manage their companies and make a lot of money. These characters are born to be leaders, but we have few of them in community. However, still I affirm that leadership comes through education and practice. Although we have examples of leadership comes naturally, they can be neglected compared to the leaders who learn to lead.
To sum it all up, it is easy to see that people can learn to be leaders by going unversitis and doing practices. I hope someday we breed loyal and expert leaders to our country for having a pleasant life. By building universities and institutes we can fulfill this dream.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, still, while, for example, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8732718894 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92528104865 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4198961892 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0740740741 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14814814815 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192438035474 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583566803768 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569282813978 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117501691763 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460120911128 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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