TPO 39 - Independent task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Finding a job that is not only suitable for you and makes you successful but also is safe a lead to a secure future is one of the priorities of humans. I completely disagree with this claim that in the past, finding this kind of job was easier. There are many reasons, which two of them that have great importance elaborate hereunder.
To begin with, nowadays the jobs have great varieties; every career in the past has been break down to specific jobs. As a result, there is more opportunity to find a job that entirely fits with your skill and capabilities. In the past, employers had less chance to find a job that fit their skills, so they should apt their responsibility and make the skills they need after finding a job. When everyone can find the right job for themselves, there is more chance to find a job that guarantees the future. For instance, I listened to a podcast about a person who, after she broke her ankle in ballet interested in friction and its function, and now she works for a company, who tries to find a way to have suitable friction everywhere and save energy from it.
Moreover, the economy improves so much, and every company receives support from the government and funders. And also, managers participate in seminars and read books to improve their management skills, and most of the employees have educated well and have essential skills for that job. So, careers are more secure than the previous ones that can fail easily because of the lack of good mangers or skillful employees. For example, my father's company can get fundings when he is in trouble. He takes part in many seminars every year to find out new techniques to improve his skills, and most of his employees graduated from well-known universities and are passionate about their jobs.
To sum up, I disagree with this claim that finding a job that helps you to have a secure and successful future is easier. Today, we can find a job fit with our skills because of various positions, and nowadays, jobs are more secure than before.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64722222222 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51902483337 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6055552172 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171770056183 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725611956223 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725339274225 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134805239414 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733280525278 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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