When thinking about the issue that nowadays teachers are less esteemed and valued by society than they were in the past, different individuals will have different ideas. Some people claim that teachers' prestige is abating since the importance of their work is decreasing. Nowadays, with the development of computer science, we have already entered an information era which we can absorb ample knowledge from Internet, therefore, the status of teachers are depressed. However, from where I stand, we always need teachers to instruct our academic and behavior, so the teachers are still valued and esteemed by society.
First and foremost, nowadays teachers tend to have a higher salary than before. Since the competition get more and more severe in society, more and more parents will pay a large amount of money to ensure that their kids can get well-educated. In this circumstance, the wages of teachers rise drastically, and the reputation and prestige of someone always have a close connection with their income. Thus teachers are esteemed by society. Take my elder brother as an example. My elder brother is a biology teacher in high school, and thanks to his good career performance he earns far more money every year. In this way, he is admired by many of my friends. Teachers always have a considerate salary and enable them to have high prestige.
In addition, teachers are the instructor of many successful people. They give these men plenty of advice to help these people to attain success. And when they share their experience to others, they will always advert that it is their teachers who give them crucial help to overcome hardship and finally achieve their goals. As a result, teachers especially good teachers are valued by the society. For instance, Zhengning Yang is a renowned physicist who had won a Noble prize. Once he came to my university and shared his research career and experience to us. And he said that he performed bad at math in high school which frustrates him a lot. While his math teacher never gave up on him and thanks to his teacher's encourage he did a good job on math and paved a solid way for his future research in physics.
In a nutshell, teachers can not only have a decent salary, but also play a critical instructive role in people's life. So they are more appreciated and valued by society than they were in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...putation and prestige of someone always have a close connection with their income. T...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e a close connection with their income. Thus teachers are esteemed by society. Take ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86172839506 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60700988365 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9908554494 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183574885106 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592657788344 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744122073941 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138510379666 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577315325384 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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