After graduation all we want is to find a job and stat as soon as possible to work. However some people question if it is better a position were you only do similar taskas all day long or work in different types of tasks during the day. Personally I prefer to do diverent tasks for several reasons.
First, I think that by doing the same task for a long period of time people usually feel tired after a few hours. Some people feel sleep and as consequence the task seems never comes to an end. For instance, once I had a job in a publicity company, my work consisted in review all the articles before they were posted online, in our web site. When I started it wasn't a problem to work with that I was excited, it was my first job. However, after a while I started to get bored and my efficiency was low.
Second, I have been reading some articles about work eficiency and several articles explain that the focous people have while doing an activity decreases through the time. So when people work in the same taks all day long their focous are compromised and that fact will implicate in less efficiency. In my last example, my lack off efficiency lead me to do some mistakes in my reviews and some texts was publicated with a lot of errors. At that time I talked to my boss and exaplained the situation. The solution os to vary my routine during the day in order to keem my mind always sharp.
To sum up, I think is realy mor satified to do diffetent job activities during the day insted of to do the same activity all day long,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...b and stat as soon as possible to work. However some people question if it is better a ...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... that by doing the same task for a long period of time people usually feel tired after a few h...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
... before they were posted online, in our web site. When I started it wasnt a problem to w...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ine, in our web site. When I started it wasnt a problem to work with that I was excit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, while, for instance, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31379310345 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3492883533 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1313134351 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3571428571 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225198732793 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803106848789 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712878574519 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157531376462 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603676554902 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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