Our world is in a constant evolution, nowadays we have communication's technologies that makes possible to know what is happaning in any place around the planet. Be aware what is going on in other country may help you to take better decisions on your job or even how to behave in situations were people from diferent places around the world are together.
In a multinational company such as, Vale, Samsung, Ford, Whirpool among other. They have sites in many countries. One country may provide the primary source materials, like iron ore yielded in Brazil that is required to produce the steel in China. So, in other to succeed in bussines you need to know that if something goes wrong in other country like corruption, war or even an economic crises, may affect your company in several ways.
In ours lives, considering the goblal world we live today. We may meet people from other nationalities, in different situation, a job reunion, a party, a lecture. In moments like this is importante do be awere off events happening around the wolrd. For example you do not want to stay out off a conversation with your boss just because you do not know that China stopped to buy iron ore from Australia and that a big moment to us in Brazil to increase our sells. That wold be awkward.
So to sum up I think that in our personal lifes, even more in our professional lifes to know about all kind of events, politial, economical that is happening around the world it is important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...olution, nowadays we have communications technologies that makes possible to know...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cris', 'crise', 'crisis'?
Suggestion: cris; crise; crisis
...ike corruption, war or even an economic crises, may affect your company in several way...
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Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...Brazil to increase our sells. That wold be awkward. So to sum up I think that i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for example, i think, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 261.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67049808429 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64734600356 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3188131282 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208328241887 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651243266542 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564014035021 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12509004588 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031294599634 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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